Friday flash 55 #27

This is a flash based on a challenge from my blogging friend, Parrot Writes:

Opal tapped the steering wheel, a cigarette between her fingers. She drew in a drag and exhaled his words. He was probably still standing outside the pancake house in Medford, watching the dust from her van with that stupid look on his face.

Damn liar, she hissed and flicked the butt at the passenger window.


11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Darksculptures
    May 31, 2010 @ 14:12:23

    You have a great way of painting the scene. Fantastic flash (as always)!


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  3. dayner
    May 29, 2010 @ 23:46:11

    I loved this too. The cigarette really makes it! So stinkin’ sorry I missed this challenge!


  4. Natasha
    May 28, 2010 @ 10:39:05

    What Parrot said. Good one!


  5. Parrot Writes
    May 28, 2010 @ 10:26:38

    OOH – good one! I Love “exhaling his words” with cigarette smoke!


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