Friday Flash 55

The monitor uttered it’s final sound and she collapsed over his lifeless body in heavy sobs. Her family stood back, crying silently. All she had wanted was for him to say he that loved her, but now it was too late. She hugged him tighter and wailed.

If only he would hug her back.

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3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. darksculptures
    Sep 12, 2009 @ 07:36:44

    You packed a lot of substance in your flash 55. Very well done.

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    • kathanink
      Sep 15, 2009 @ 15:07:02

      Thanks!! I am going to try to do this every week. And so far, I am doing OK on my 300 words a day…

      Reply

  2. kathanink
    Sep 11, 2009 @ 14:44:31

    For anyone who is scratching their head, Flash 55 is writing a piece of flash fiction in 55 words or less.

    Reply

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